... That was so... I don't really have words for it. I love it, its real. Its pain, and sorrow and love; and I can feel it all. Whoa. More would be nice.

omg! *tears!!* that was so sad! u r such an awesome writer! of course... there isn't much else to do in alaska now is there? lol, jk!

so, the first thing I red was the finale to this? I see. Very angsty and sad *hugs* I really enjoyed it and it gives a rather sad viewpoint to suicide which is good because suicide is always sad. I like that you didn't give the characters names. They aren't important to know who the character is inside. The characters have a little bit of all of us in them I think. I actually did a two story combo thing where the characters didnt have names. It ended a lot happier than this though. Anyway I REALLY gotta sleep. I have class tomorrow *shudders* japanese, blech. I'm having way too many issues with passive and causitive, and causitive passive. WIERDNESS! I GO BAI BAI NOW! Like I said at deviantart, BE MY FRIEND! I LOVE YOU! *Hug*

~Centi

I know that I didn't write a review for the other story, Trapped Inside Pain, but I would like to say now that I loved it. That was the very first story that I read here at Fiction Press, and is why I am a member here. I like how you don't name the characters or even put a whole lot of detail into their appearences, and just pour everything into the emotion of it. That's why these two stories are so great, because of the thoughts and emotion. Please do write more about this pair.

And, I know this is awful for me to ask, but would you mind checking my stories out? They don't suck too bad, I don't think... I hope. o.o;;

Goodluck in the future and I hope you continue this.