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Reviews For: Return to Innocence: Devotion
DragonLady 2005-03-31 . chapter 1
Do these guys have skeletal systems or exoskeletons? Do they shed their skin completly, or in peices like we do? Do they keep grubs and worms and things like that as pets, or have vertebrates evolved that far?

*snoogles Imite* He's so cuute!
Sariku 2003-12-27 . chapter 3
I like the world you've created here. I haven't seen many insect anthros, but you've done a wonderful job explaining them.
Lovely story, well explained, and you've got wonderful voices for you're characters.
kalmia raphael 2003-07-24 . chapter 2
*mentally argues with herself for five minutes before finally giving in*

*deep breath*

KAWAII~! ^_^

love the ending, as you can see.

evil cricket.

i love your writing- can't see anything i don't like so far ^_^
kalmia raphael 2003-07-24 . chapter 1
Mental masturbation. *snickers*

I really like your characters ^_^ And the idea of an insect/animal world is interesting.
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