That hits really close to home...it makes me cringe...

Aw, I would have liked it before but now I like it more because it rhymed! For me, that's really hard to do.
This sounds a little personal to you. I mean, it seems like a lot of your writing has some personal value but I feel it more in this. Maybe it's just me being in a stupor over the fact that it rhymed. Don't mind me. I tend to drool over great work. ^_^=

oh my wow

This is a very beautiful poem. Very deep. I like the meter and tone.
Hmm...I'm doing an ISU on Self Mutilation for my Psych class...would you grant me the honour of placing this poem on my bristle board? Of course, your name will be all over it. (It's a paper, if I don't cite I get in major crap and fail.)
*~*Nobara*~*

I can't get enough poems tonight. I swear I'm starting to feed off of them. That was very pretty, very moribish... but point was taken. Never stop writing! Such a dreadful thing.
Prof. Delusional

I like your rhyme scheme however your poem is a little juvinile. it starts with a basic concept(wanting to die) and then doesnt really capture the readers emotion, I do find that however at the end it suggests there have been other times where your wanting to die is actually a fleeting cry for help that perhaps nobody is answerring or you are ignoring for attention, thank you for that submission. You might want to read some of my work... please