love the story!

I thought edmund was dead?!?!?!?

what happened to abe's brothers? Surely they're not dead because abe didn't even mourn them! I think Abe should probably show more guilt because technically, it was his fault they got captured.

Great story, brilliantly writing with one logical yet surprising turn after another. Beautiful rich characters, it was truly wonderful, all loose ends covered moderately.

I LOVE IT.

great story! I read it all at once. You're a talented writer. ^_^

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good job with this chap. It was pretty neat.

neat, keep it up. one question: does she only riad on her own town when she's a pirate?

well I didn't read your other one but I do really like this one. Iwant to keep reading.

lurvely story babe... i still cant picture Abe in my mind tho... and im sorry, i dont mean to be insulting... but i HATE HIS NAME :(, anywho, keep up the good work luv :)

Abrupt ending... Err, wouldn't someone arrest/kill Abe for killing the governor? And then kill Eleanor for being a pirate? Ah well. Nice story anyway, even if everything moved at a very quick pace. Good job.