 boys kiss girls 2006-03-14 . chapter 1=)
haha... paper mache reminds me of freshman year... giant sea turtles rock. great job on this. |
 Humor Me Pink 2005-11-21 . chapter 1LOL cute. You were being nice and reviewing on mine, So i wanted to return the favor... purple swirls and purple strips would be a cooler mental image, though. :) |
 Aslan Israel 2005-06-08 . chapter 1Short, but a lovely thought. |
 Windsong 2005-05-08 . chapter 1I can't shake the nagging feeling that there's some kind of deep meaning to this poem that I'm missing. Which, of course, is probably just my overactive imagination, seeing as the poem's only two lines long and about a paper mache cat, and it's very hard to be deep when talking about a purple kitty. ;^^ Anyways, I am amazed by how deftly and with so little words you describe your kitty; it's like painting a picture with a single stroke. And yes, it's that last sentence in the second line that keeps making me think this poem has some strange depth to it, even though it doesn't. Oh well. Keep writing! -Windsong |
 Werecat99 2005-05-07 . chapter 1Aww... that was deeply touching! So short and yet so tender.. Loved it! |
 Belle the Shadow-Cat 2003-08-11 . chapter 1Very intrigueing, to say the least, a little short but interesting.
--Belle |
 The Light and The Glass 2003-08-03 . chapter 1i like the first line, but the second seemed o childish to fit into a poem. i always find using a name runis a poems small sense of "mystery of thought", i process i created which makes you connect with a character no matter who/what they are.
>mysterykittyx |