I'm not christian, or anywhere near, but I still found this a stunning poem. This one jumped up and smacked me across the face with a 2 by 4. The emotion your poured into this vibrates off of it.

Awesome job! It is so relieving to see someone who still acknowleges Christ and his ultimate sacrifise for us all. You really lift me up and express the same feeling that I feel in your work. Please keep going! Thank you for being willing to stand up for our savior and testifying of his love! God bless you!

An awesome way to describe the scene and a good reminder.

Heart of the Sword

Great job.I am currently reading Ted Dekker's When Heaven Weeps and it points out that we shouldn't forget the pain Jesus suffered for you for helping me was bless you.