Write more, why not write one about high school?

Interesting plot...are you going to continue? I'd like to read more!

real good please continue. thank you for reviewing on my story. i have another chapter coming but the computer i saved it on has no internet yet.. so yup.

*bites your neck and drinks your blood*
I am free years of college? Are you there yet? Well. Maybe for some people it works that way.
But there certainly is recovery from high school, and middle school. A kind of ** off freedom where who you are is separate from popular and unpopular. Or can be, if you choose. These kind of stories, im somewhat wary about because - sure, I can relate. I was a freak, certainly. Luckily ignored, but not bullied. But no longer being a part of that world, the extremism of the labels makes me uncomfortable. The “unpopular” and “rejected” people like to use the same old dichotomy of us vs them, and cling to their own tragedy.
Though I do remember what it felt like. Still, I think I felt too much of the outside to view it as us and them, because there was no us. There was only me with no idea what to say to anyone. But yeah. Hope this story avoids a good/evil kind of approach.
Also, keep writing. You write because of your own truth, and that’s whats most important. So many people I see who write, seem to like that almost primal urge, which seems to me the thing that makes writing and writers essential.

starting out well.

well, it feels like you're ... too eager to tell certain things. good to have that need but take a little time with it. your urgency interferes with the feel of the writing itself. you tell the important details but the writing could use some editing, more of yourself in the tone to keep the reader interested in not only the facts, but the words. because if the flow is weak you could lose steam. but you know what you're writing, and what you're writing is good.
i like the friendliness of the tone.

interesting so far. I guess I can relate to your move from North Carolina. I did the same thing two months ago, to alabama. Made good friends there, and I'll never forget them. Anyway, continue writing this, it's good.

Hm.. this is a very interesting story so far and one that almost anyone can relate to. The truth is, that most people are reals, everyone, no matter how popular or not, has things that they keep back from people, insecurities. As I have gotten older I have seen this first hand. Sure, some people have it worse than others, but even the most popular have their own problems.

If this is just like your other story, then I need to read it again. I realy like it and i think you should continue it.
Ja Ne-
MOE :D