Wow...I love this poem. It kind of gives you a feeling of...floatiness. (that isn't a word. oh well.) Like...you're floating through an endless, a beautiful, an enduring and everlasting space. The place where we all want to be, sometimes...
Okay, I'm getting too ahead of myself. I'm only thirteen...I shouldn't be using such words and seeming so stuck-up...
Anyway, great poem. This is going on my favorites list!

Wow... I really really liked that one. I agree with West... I don't find a lot of appealing poetry on this site and it's a thrill when you find something nice. And this is definetely a nice piece. Awsome job. Your rhymes were very good and I didn't notice any real rhythm problems. The topic was very cute, very nice. Going on my faves for sure.
Sterces

wow, this is incredible. It's so simple, and yet elegant. You are very talented. I have found very few writings on this site that I "connect" with, and yours is one of them. I hope to read more of your writings soon.

This was fantastic! I loved how it rhymed and flowed! I'm sorry that I didn't review this sooner! And its okay about the italics!

~ CoolBeans18s

over all fantastic picture. i love the rhythm and the words describe the undescribable!! Write on Dear Poet, Write on! ^..^ (I wrote a little poem called the purple cat. Will write a longer one about him.)