This is amazing! Very descriptive and everything else!

You should really keep this story going. It's really good and even though he says he was on drugs and never actually saw all the creatures, I'm not so sure... Anyway, judging from this story alone, as I haven't read much else of yours, I think that you are a really talented writer. As I said before, this is GREAT!! :) Please update soon!!

Again, great chapter. This is going on my favorites list! :)

Wow!! This is a really good beginning!! The main character seems totally realistic!! Okay, on to the next chapter...