hey donna's friend again!! we just had s*x!

i loved this one! it paints such a wonderful picture in my head. good job

~color outside the lines~

Dude, you know how to do angst like a riot. It's ridiculous how fluid your writing is.

this is really good to, it flows really well and has a great style

yeah, it is sorta like my stuff, i liked it, it seems sorta depressing, but not all the stuff i write is depressing...just, when i am feeling some things, all i can do is pick up my pen and write, because its how i bleed, not with a razor, but by the ink, thanks for the review though bro...