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r.mai 2004-08-24 ch 3,	abusewell, i'm glad it wasn't a sad ending. i guess it's open to interpretation. i was kinda hoping it'd be all nice and happy but yeah. well i hope nathen has a chance to explain to james about everything... it was very angsty so i guess that's why i really wanted them to be happy in the end. and if they think it'll ruin the story, then they don't have to read it. it's that simple. k, be seeing ya next stories!
Emilia Paranoica 2003-09-11 ch 3, anon.	abuseOhh.. I really love it, I'm more for ending it at part two, but I'm satisfied by the not so happy resolution. Sometimes I find myself bored, or better, annoyed by all this "perfect love" and "perfect lovers", it depends on my mood. Ok, I'm forcing myself to stop.
Emilia Paranoica 2003-09-11 ch 3, anon.	abuseOhh.. I really love it, I'm more for ending it at part two, but I'm satisfied by the not so happy resolution. Sometimes I find myself bored, or better, annoyed by all this "perfect love" and "perfect lovers", it depends on my mood. Ok, I'm forcing myself to stop.
Scarlet Phoenix 2003-09-03 ch 3, anon.	abuseDamn, you're good. I loved the two POV technique, it really brings out the irony. I'm off to read more of your stuff now, 'cause it's not everyday you find an author that can balance out the romance and angst and touchy-feely stuff out so well. ^_~
rachel 2003-08-27 ch 3, anon.	abuseno flame! this is too beautiful to flame. you really have a way with using simple words to construct somthing completely beautiful and comples. wow!
Heart O'fire 2003-08-22 ch 3,	abuseI would tell you everything that I loved about this, but that's called plagerism.
hector savage 2003-08-21 ch 3,	abuseCool. You left it the way it was meant to be left.
Edana 2003-08-17 ch 3,	abuseYay, nice ending! Still sad and a little bitter sweet, but with that lovely ending note of hope. I loved the emotion in your story, and the characters were easy to relate too and I'm glad that at least they love each other and want to take a chance with that love - not everything is entirely hopeless. I liked it ^_^ Tore at the heartstrings too.
hector savage 2003-08-14 ch 2,	abuseI'm torn between wanting a happy ending and just letting things be. Damn it! I don't know what I want...do I want happiness or let things be real? I guess that that answers my question. I want this story to be real. Leave it the way it was meant to be left.
gwen ha du 2003-08-14 ch 2, anon.	abuseHey, as we are asked, I would say that now, you can’t deny them a happy end. I don’t say it just because I like happy endings. ^^ You could have stopped after the first chapter and live us on a sad note (or, at least on an uncertain note ^^) but now that you wrote it, we know he’s not going back to his girlfriend (or is he?). Well, I mean, if he is not going back to her, they have to give it a try. Perhaps wouldn’t it last but hey, I don’t see why two single lovers wouldn’t try. ^^ He could also stay with his girlfriend. But in that case, wouldn’t he be kind of a coward, now that he said he is not really in love with her? It would be unfair to all the characters, wouldn't it? But, please, don’t stop now. ^^ And… By the way, I love the way you wrote this story.^_^ And I 'm trully found of nathen and James. PS: please forgive my possible mistakes in English, I'm not really fluent.
L.J. is LOST 2003-08-12 ch 2,	abuseYeah! Post it, post it, post it! Loving it very much! I know, I know, I've been reading your stories, but I love them so much! Continue, continue!
Edana 2003-08-09 ch 2,	abuseYay, my rambling was useful for once ^_^;; Anyway, I liked this chapter too. It was great to get into the mind of Nathen, because I had the feeling that he wasn't being as mean as it might have seemed in the last chapter. I just personally thought it would be a good idea, and I think it's worked. I actually feel a little sorry for Nathen now. And of course, very well written again. So painful and heartbreaking. The ending? You could end it here. Or you could write a third part. Maybe you could write a hopeful ending rather than a flat out happy or sad one. Y'know, a hint of reconciliation or something. Anyway, I'm going to stop with all my opinions, I feel like a teacher or something. I just like reading all these well-written emotions.
FamousOneLiners 2003-08-08 ch 2,	abusehonestly, i dunt know if happy is good in this case, regardless, do what you must, and i shall r/r!
Edana 2003-08-07 ch 1,	abuseAw, that was so sad. So bittersweet. I love how the use of second person made me feel that much more emotional about the writing, more connected to what was happening. And the way you created the mood and the emotions without any melodrama was really effective too. I liked it. Personally I quite like this ending. It's kinda ambiguous, with the words at the end. The other guy never actually says that he's leaving or anything. I don't know. If you can think of a next part then I'd read it. Maybe you could do the same scene from the other guy's POV, explaining what he thinks. You don't necessarily have to write a resolution. Damn, I'm blabbing now. Anyway, I really like this fic, how you created the mood and make me feel for the characters. Very good ^_^
i-nv-u50 2003-08-02 ch 1,	abusehappy ending, happy ending definitely!! you cant make the poor boy sadder T.T happy ending? k, i'm stopiing now :D good story ^^

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