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Kynria 2004-01-10 . chapter 1
This is awesome! really well written and all the more powerful in second person. I especially liked the last two paragraphes.
Excellent story!
JediGal101 2003-07-29 . chapter 1
Wow...how the heck did you think this up? Oh, well. It was beautifully written.
Sunflower Philosophy 2003-07-25 . chapter 1
At first this talked straight to me... the idea of being alone is something I've been moaning about for a while now, with no one who really understands what it is I've discovered.
But when it started to get angry, I parted with it. I personally don't care whether or not they don't understand; it isn't their fault. I believe all humans have the potential to become wonderful. I have no anger towards them. And I have regrets that I left them behind. And I don't believe they'll ever need me... it took me a while to learn that not only can't I change anyone but myself, but it is really not my duty to.
Anyway, this is beautifully written. Strong images and iron-cast words.

m~* Sunflower, anyone?
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