you sound very suductive...just what do you hold the key to eh?

That was a poem that I'm sure many people could realte to. I'm somewhat did just not to this extreme. (Yoo much of a chicken I suppose) Nice work as always.

Keep writing.

-Seras

very cool... sad & hopeful at teh same time! excellent!

I've been in the same situation a few times, believe me. This poem is sweet and powerful. Good job.

Nice job. There is a nice, soothing cadence that helps to give a feeling of empathy. I had mine set up the same way, and went back and added spaces to break it up. I think it helped. Just a thought. (I stuck it in my faves the way it is) - Jess

Nice job! Good flow, easy to read, and well-written.
Keep writing!!
-Kris

interesting, the last part makes it seem like you really cant, anywayz, like it, has a good flow to it, nciely done

Wow--good work here. :)

"You were deceived,
With cunning words and style"

I liked that line for some reason...keep up the brilliant work!

**Crimson

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That was very good. I don't read many love poems and I have to say this is one of the best.

Gosh, this was good ! i liked the way it reminded me of a song-like piece.. thanks for reviewing .. i didnt like that one .. wrote it once upon a time .. i'll get better .. haha ..

kick ** poem bro,couldnt tell ya how to make it better cause why mess with a good thing eh? ^.^

Aw, that's so sad, yet sweet. If "She" was really like that, then "He" deserves better.

Nice.

awesome, a beautiful piece

Great way to express yourself in this poem. I loved it! great =)!