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| fairEtales 2006-04-14 ch 1,  | abuseOMFG! These poems are BEYOND amazing. Gorgeous, beautiful and magnificent. LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! My favorite was May, even though my birthday is in April, because you described it so beautifully and I love spring. Lovely work! |
| BlueRose218 2005-05-11 ch 1, | abuseI love how you made November's birthstone acually sound pretty.^^ Personally, I hate my yellow topax jewellry... but I'll have to look at it in a different light now. |
| poetic abortion 2004-11-20 ch 1, | abuseThese where all so pretty !! My favourite would have to be January and December. The prettiest in my mind ! Hope your doing well !! We miss you here on FP. And as you wished I will not comment on TRUTH-VISION. ^-^ ~ Noelle ~ |
| white-clouds 2004-10-16 ch 1, | abuseThia was simply beatiful! I love your work! ~Lara |
| AmberEye 2004-07-11 ch 1, | abuseYou are a very good writer, and I'm not just saying that. Your haikus are really thought-provoking and just all around good. And I really think you should write a story, because I think that it'd be really good. I also think that it's really awsome for you to say that you're a Christian, because there are a lot of people who think it's lame or stupid. But I say good for you, it's really quite brave to stand up to what you believe in and I respect that. *~*AmberEye*~* |
| WaterMelon Surprise 2003-12-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseGo Opals!! Haha. And it is true, opal is a rainbow of hues. My opal is always red/green/yellow when the sun hits it. It's so pretty. *sigh* |
| Chocolate 4 You 2003-12-26 ch 1, | abuseThat was awesome! I must say that I thought that december was the best, even thought sapphire is my birthstone. I dare say though that Febuary was great. Amethyst reminds me of Kenshin's eyes. *sigh* |
| Prowling Muse 2003-11-07 ch 1, | abuseI feel as if I'm holding Blue Topaz close to my own heart. Thanks for polishing up all these precious gems! I hope that didn't make me sound like a material person. --_--; |
| Melancholy Butterfly 2003-10-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is absolutely beautiful! Your writing clearly mirrors the consideration you have placed into it. Once again one word...beautiful. |
| dude 2003-10-23 ch 1, anon. | abusepretty |
| rangerschick88 2003-10-23 ch 1, | abuseWow! I loved your poem. It was very descriptive and powerful. I look forward to reading more of your work!:-) |
| coat 2003-10-09 ch 1, | abuseHaiku is so hard to write... and you've just written 12 amazing pieces... so talented you are :D |
| Topaz Waters 2003-10-05 ch 1, | abuseI love this! Yellow Topaz, my own birthstone, happened to be my favorite. I love how each haiku not only reflected the qualities of the stone, but also the time of year that they symbolize. My only complaint is that some lines don't follow the haiku format, but I still love it. Brilliant job! |
| kamikaze899 2003-09-28 ch 1, | abuseloved them all! sapphire's my favorite.. keep writing ^_^ |
| katmonkey 2003-09-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is great. It's also a really good subject to write haikus about. |