ooh, creepy. is he going into kokuun? or something else?

update please!

Looks like awesomeness. I like the words and stuff adapted for insect use. very cool! ^.^

*can't grow...*

Fascinating. First, the concept of an insectine race: fabulous. And you carry it out in a thoroughly natural way. I like it-very sci-fi. (Except the fact that insects can grow past a certain size because of their tracheal tubes...but you probably knew that.) Then there's the plot: fairly standard fantasy-style storyline so far, but with its own unique personality and plenty of 'growing room.' Then of course, there's the fact that you can actually write. Narration, descriptions, even dialouge, in a way that flows naturally. That was the most suprising bit.
Methinks I'll be coming back to read this more. Update, please!