Amazing poem...sounds a little like an old legend, maybe it's just me.
I really liked the lines, "What do you wish for,
Little sister?
Revenge?
Or is it forgetting?"
I understand *that* concept well enough...
One crit: The poem ran on a little long. Other than that, it was amazing.
>winged one

I rather like this poem. I like the way you have broken up the lines specifically, using the breaks to imply more meaning. It was well done. Also I think your repetition of words and phrases was particularly effective and is very reminiscent of a mother or older sister cajoling a younger sister, or child. I like it alot. ^_^ Hope you keep writing.