Absolutely beautiful and moving. so much in those three lines.

Hi! Good poem, it's powerful! Well done
Cya =)
*WG

powerful words... love the last line.

GaSP*... you make it hard for me to breathe. taken back by your brilliance. wow. wow. and wow! oh, and whoa.

you know a have a severe attachment to black roses, mainly because ai red a series in which the symbol blakc rose was used very muchly often, and i thought this haiku was amazing, beautiful in its meaing, its interpretion, its images everything was just beautiful in bulf. kudos, amazing work.

Sehr schön, sehr düster. Weiß noch nicht so genau, was ich mir darunter vorstellen soll, aber genau das finde ich so interessant an dem Haiku! Man muss tatsächlich drüber nachdenken...(und das in den Ferien, mein Gott Stoffi, was tust du mir da an!?)
cio, hoellenwauwau

It makes me think...I've certainly never seen a black rose before.

This is great! The imagery is amazing, and I loved every word or it! You're seriously talented.

It's beautiful. It's just so beautiful.

This is so vivid and beautiful. It creates a great image to think about.


~Heart of the Sword

This is so beauitful! "Trails of blood on shadowed thorns" - brilliant! It's so vivid, and it paints a haunting picture... Wonderful

~ CoolBeans18s

i like this, it leaves room for the imagination to decide what exactly it's about. also, haiku's are sometimes very hard to do because they're so short, good job!