I like this... How often have I (or anybody) felt this way?

inspiring and encouraging... this is awesome. my favorite part's the last stanza.

hey, you're good. real good. I like reading your stuff. a lot.

aw - im all happy now!!
:-D

well done - an exclent poemm, i especially love the line:
'Heart beats out of moral obligation',
very good!

Awesome job...Beautiful ending...

It's very moving and inspirational. Such a lovely masterpiece!

Einfach nur schön! Die letzte Strophe gefällt mir am besten, irgendwie ermutigend! ^_^
cio, hoellenwauwau

Great message. I loved that last line.


~Heart of the Sword

This is just wonderful! Amamzing! Your words are so vivid... I especially loved the last three lines -"Go steadily through its fiery rain
And the curtain falls again
Forgotten will be the time you cried" Its beautiful!

~ CoolBeans18s

i like this too, the lines are all cut at the end; each their own point (well, most of them) yet they leave a lingering sensation, keep it up!