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| Ma Tai 2003-09-07 ch 1,  | Not bad. I feel that it explains reality pretty accurately! |
| Lidless Eye 2003-07-27 ch 1,  | Really neat description. This reminds me of the tanka I just wrote, "Blindfolded". Resembles the same idea... nice work on your haiku, keep on writing! |
| Psycho-kyugurl 2003-07-26 ch 1, | This is great! |
| Keep it 100 2003-07-25 ch 1, | Good advice. ~Heart of the Sword |
| teh tarik 2003-07-25 ch 1, | BEautifully true. Never run away! Great haiku... |
| Mime 2003-07-25 ch 1, | You describe reality perfectly in such short words. Great job! |