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| Eirien 2004-09-20 ch 1,   | An interesting, really powerful poem. I like the concept "pain and I are one" and the way you express it so well. The rhymes and rhythm flow nicely. I especially like the paradox "pain as my enemy, pain as my friend", and the way it is explained in the following two lines. |
| Samekian 2004-02-23 ch 1, | Wow...really good...I love the second stanza, and the second last line...great rhyme scheme too... |
| ittybittytreefrog 2004-01-26 ch 1, | This is a sad but beautifully written poem. When I saw this I was expecting another of the overdone, cliched, angsty rants you see so often on this site but you pleasantly surprised me. |
| freakatwork 2004-01-02 ch 1, | hey mei dis poem is really aweosme lar..i must say dis is one of your exceptionally especially stupendously chun ones...honestly i love it |
| MR.SEAN 2003-12-11 ch 1, | I like that one, Can I read it at my school? I wanna, but I want you to tell me I can. So can I please! ::begs a lil:: ~SHANIZLE~ |
| Gercian 2003-11-23 ch 1, | bitterly sweet... but very good... nice rhymes... |
| Ayx 2003-10-29 ch 1, | where do you come up with such things that can touch ones soul an pull from them feelings they wish to hide? Ayx P.S. Great Poem |
| Static Black 2003-09-24 ch 1, | Wow...I love you. This was GREAT! wonderful wonderful work. very well done. *claps* you are truly gifted Tara |
| handle187 2003-09-16 ch 1, | Excellent, very good, I have no idea how I overlooked this poem before. |
| me10 2003-09-14 ch 1, | really powerful poem. nice use of words. |
| Kowski 2003-09-04 ch 1, | oh this is awesome! your rhyming was very good, and you got the point straight across. thanks for the review! |
| Niskala 2003-08-24 ch 1, | Wonderful!! I like how you make each phrase stand on its own yet still let the poem flow til the end! |
| Anjeni Windsinger 2003-08-20 ch 1, | I'm going to follow the other two before me, and add you to my Favorite Author's list as well... This is one -amazing- poem. There are few poems that can make my mind go blank after reading them, but this one did it. FANTASTIC piece. Keep writing. |
| Seri v. 2.01 2003-08-13 ch 1, | Wow... The imagery in this is very good.. You have impressed me once again. To my favorite Authors list ye go! |
| weatherbeaten 2003-08-09 ch 1, | And you said I had talent!? This is great. I could never compare to this. You just made my fav. authors list. |