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| S.O.S. water 2006-06-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really love this poem, especially the image of the ship ripping through time. |
| Hail the Warrior 2004-05-05 ch 1,  | abuseUmm, I like it but it seems almost incomplete or more abstract in thinking than I am capable of. But I like the first line, makes me think of battles for some reason. HtW |
| atreju 2004-03-29 ch 1, | abusethere is no such thing as time. heck, what am i doing?? review: this creates a subtle kind of imagery, actually, and i dont' know why. now that i reread the last line, it seems to support my above opinion. it's good, really. |
| MR.SEAN 2004-01-25 ch 1, | abuseThat one is cool too, very descriptive! |
| Kelpylion 2003-11-28 ch 1, | abuseCool...I'd never have thought to write haiku about that...I love the broken imagery an ideas here. |
| handle187 2003-09-16 ch 1, | abuseSuper computer The only reality Number forty-two |
| Furball*of*Evilness 2003-09-15 ch 1, | abuseI like this haiku. I'm obsessed with time travel. (never can write about it, i suck completely at sci-fi) so i'd like to say you made a very awsome haiku. yup. ^.^ keep writing, and always eat lots of sugar in one sitting! ^.^ |
| cosmo-queen 2003-09-11 ch 1, | abuseTravelling through time. So many possibilities that it would probably overwhelm us in the end. Keep writing :) *cosmo-queen* |
| Artemis Astralstar 2003-09-07 ch 1, | abusepowerful, and topical for me, as i have a debate going on the subject. |
| SweetGrape 2003-09-03 ch 1, | abuseHey- nice! I never read a sci-fi haiku before!:) The first describes the machine, the second tells what it does (and well said), and the third says what it affects- nicely done. |
| simpleplan13 2003-08-24 ch 1, | abusekoodles! |
| Myra Kilgore 2003-08-23 ch 1, | abuseI like this one. you are a great writer, and i just love J. R. R. Tolkien also, The Lord Of The Rings rocks! |
| LancerDragoon 2003-08-22 ch 1, | abuseCool haiku! |
| Anagronax 2003-08-09 ch 1, | abuseTime traveling... Now why isn't that invented yet? I'd love to go back in time and take that test again and get an A+ for it... Oh well... Nice one. |
| PurpleLilac 2003-07-29 ch 1, | abuseHey, this actually reminds me of the movie Time Machine which we watched together with Ah Sia! It was the first time we went out together wasn't it? |