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| Cloud Burst 2005-04-09 ch 1,   | lovely lovely, captivating! |
| pale doll 2004-12-11 ch 1, | Oh how do you do it? This is so beautiful and powerful, I wish I could write haikus like this. |
| Generic Hack Number 23476 2004-11-20 ch 1, | Brillant. Sometimes less really can be more. I love your Haiku. |
| featherlight 2004-03-02 ch 1, | Breathtaking--although you mentioned no colors, I'm seeing the sun set vividly, and all the dark shades of night. Amazing, the pictures three lines can evoke. |
| Lauren K 2004-01-26 ch 1, | OOh I like this one! "Fiery horizon" is a good phrase, as is "darkness unveils." Wow. Two phrases I liked in what...17 syllables? Congrats. ~Kiara |
| MR.SEAN 2004-01-25 ch 1, | Sounds evil to me, how do you get so many reviews its scary lol! |
| Lina Inverse 2003-11-23 ch 1, | Beautiful descriptions! |
| pyroprincess4rmeverwood 2003-11-23 ch 1, | really awesome. i love how you used evanescent or however it's spelled. i'm too lazy to check. thanks |
| Desert Wrath 2003-11-23 ch 1, | I liked how dusk was described in this haiku. It sends beautiful imagery to my mind. Good job! -Desert Wrath |
| handle187 2003-09-16 ch 1, | Phoenix of teh Zeus Delivers hope to someone In a different zone |
| godawful teen-angst poetry 2003-09-12 ch 1, | another good one...you know, one time at dusk it was literally pink outside, to the point where if you stood outside and looked in, our house lights looked green by contrast. Er. Anyways--yeah. Great job. I have yet to master the haiku as well as you and some others on here who continually blow me away. |
| cosmo-queen 2003-09-11 ch 1, | Dusk is a truly beautiful time of day. Or night, lol. You have a talent for writing descriptive haikus :) *cosmo-queen* |
| SweetGrape 2003-09-03 ch 1, | Beautiful descriptions! Each line has its merits and I keep changing which one I like best! The word 'evanescent' is an interesting wat to look at it and gives a preliminary image and then the next line tells of a poast picture quenched. The third line is extra intriguing because nighttime is standardly veiling, not unveiling, so it's a cool way to see it. |
| Thrift Whore 2003-09-02 ch 1, | Very nice.. Such beautiful words. :) Thank you for reviewing my poetry, also. |
| thaiswirl 2003-08-30 ch 1, | great words i could picture it in my mind...and thanks for all the reviews. |