good chapter, weird stuff there with Edward. And he is Derrick's son? intense.

Weird, but cool. I dont think I quite see what spreads the disease, but I will figure it out.

There is still so much I dont know, I must read on and discover.

Weird, its like an episode of the twilight zone, one of those horror ones. Good writting here. The focus on 11:59, the appearence of the monster. I am going to have to read more. But right now, I have to go study.

That was a good story. Abrupt end, but... I liked it. Good job.

Nice. I got sidetracked for a while- but i will finnish this, in due time. ^^U I like the idea, and the way its written.

Very nice... I'll read more later and figure out where this is really going, but I'm rather distracted at the moment... Nice statr, tho.

Good good good…storng chapter..keep writing

Wow! Happiness. Absolutely awesome, other than some typos lol. Softball. . . I won't say that I hope you lose, but I can't wait for more writing. Anyhoo, good job! : )

:clap: *cries* That was wonderful! *sniff* You made up a good, happy ending!! Good job!

Well, that was certainly and interesting development there. Never would of guessed Derrick had a child. . . it's crazy. Anyway, I'll finish the story when I have another opporunity; I like it so far. Hope you keep writing. BTW I really love the Dark Tower quotes in you profile. . . those books are the absolute best!

E!! Awesome. . . it says that there is another chapter. . . but my computer won't let me go there to read it. . darn. Anyway, it is REALLY, really awesome. Slightly confusing because it has been so long since I read the rest, but good! Great! : D

Wow, very… interesting to put it plainly. This is very well done. I’d like to invite you to a writing forum. I hope you enjoy the community and share some of your interesting works.
http://ucps.proboards30.com/

Easy the strongest chapter to the story, the story is strong overall. Thank you for the reviews on my work, "Evil Airs" and "Insect." I hope you start a new short story, because I was wondering how you fared at writing psychological horror, you got the skills to write horror so stay with it.

Loving the Gunslinger in your Profile. Go STEVE..en...king...