I know how this feels and its great having someone you can share everything with... This needs to be on the rack with other peoples hits. Excellent song! Thank you for your review.
Needa S

Excellent, that person is very lucky,
a very sweet poem/song

aw...this is real sweet!

really good. you're very good at writing. i've never been too good with this kind of style, so its always fun to see someone who is

~color outside the lines~

aw so sweet! ooh, that fits my mood perfectly...mushy is good every once in awhile, right?
What is there to criticize?? I'm just gonna sit and look all dreamy lol.
good job
kat

Yet another beautiful work. I truly wish I could sing but my voice isn't improving, just my guitar playing. Anyways, it's really great.
~CQ White Oleander CQ~

very sweet, heh. I really wish I could get better at my reviewing than this. I think its just how I am, I put everything in my own writing that I blank in everything else. I'm sorry.. so then, just believe me when I say this is an amazing song. I love it ::is quite the romantic:: ~R

Aw...pretty. I have definitely felt this way before...
~God bless~

yeah love song. song wise i like it. sounds cool wivout a tune flows well. great chorus gotta be my fave part. i'd like the entire song more if i could handle the whole love theme. o well, still great. i'm sure u r lucky

o I know this feeling!! you captured it perfectly with your wording, and i especially liked the beginning part. it was very cool. keep on writing!

Hey,

Beautiful piece. Really touching. I loved you opening imagery. I just wish I could hear the music that would accompany this normally. I mean I sort of worked up a tune in my head but I imagine it is different then what you have pictured.

Great work - and as always I love your stuff.
Jade

Welcome back! It's very refreshing to read your fabulous work after one tiring morning...sigh. I think I'm going to take a nap now.

Good night.

yes, it is mushy, but nice all the same. the problem with songs on this sight is the lack of music. I would like to hear the rhythem more, but I think I picked it out in my head. nice job

aw...so sappy =) but it's a good thing! I like * and i don't usually like romanticism* it has nice rhytm and words flow really easy, good job!

Oh my, tear in my eye *point*!

This is another sweet, touching, poem after which I am tongue tied!

Thank you,
TL Demeter

PS. So glad you're back!! And if I may get your permission to call thou my muse, I'd like to thank you for inspiring my Weiss fic, Aya/Schu waiting at Aff.net,... I shall thank thee one way or the other! Thank you!