Awesome! I really want to read more, please continue.

nice story. i'd like to see it turned into a game or a movie or even a book. interesting concept.

it was very interesting. i wanna know what's gonna happen now. the character already has a personality, and it's pretty real. sorry, i don't have time to read the other 2 yet. maybe later this week...but i really liked what you have. tell me when you write more

So far so good. It's a bit short, even for a prologue, so hopefully your next chapter will be longer. Otherwise keep going.