there were a few spelling errors through the story but overall it was great and had alot of suspence through it

Absolutely wicked! Nice twist though I felt the ending was too abrupt. GOOd story! Please write more.

I guess this means the stories over!

Great work, and I'm dead proud of myself because I guessed who it was!!

So that'll be a big "WooHoo Me" then!!

Liking this story big time, and looking backward to your next creation!

Spawny

You got me well and truly hooked with this one!! So much so that I'm not going to write any more myself until I know whats going on with this story!!

Well, I might write a little more, depends on if I feel like it...lol

This is great stuff...totally looking forward to the next installment

Spawny

Woohoo!! Cliffhanger!!

Great stuff...cant wait till you get the next chapter up!!

Spawny

acually i didn't read it i'm not aloud to ,james