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| FutureWriter 2004-04-08 ch 2, | You updated! Wow. I haven't read this story in a while. A lot of characters to get used to and I'll probably be a little confused until they all sink in, but I really am into this. The character interactions and dialogue flow smoothly and it's really interesting so far. Please, update sooner! LOL. Keep up the good work. |
| orolin 2004-04-07 ch 2, | Oh Toggle, I do very much like so far! You're characters all have very snazzy, great names, hehe :D I like the storylines that have started up already . . . is it wrong that I want to slash Noah and Nathaniel already? :D Post more! :) |
| Circus 2003-12-03 ch 1, | Awesome, great start. Introducing the characters one after the other like that is a bit challenging, but you pulled it off well, and they blend perfectly, I beleive. I like the dialogue, they all sound like people I wish I knew. |
| FutureWriter 2003-07-26 ch 1, | Wow, this is really good so far. Good introduction to the various characters and their personalities. Character development is important :) You don't want things to move too quickly, either. Draw out the anticipation; keep readers guessing what's going to happen. I like all the little subplots, too. Keep writing! I look forward to the next chapter. ~Maura~ |
| orolin 2003-07-26 ch 1, | Who Official Beta here! :D Love the story so far, can't wait until you send me the next bit. I think I fancy Nathaniel just for his name, lol. And Noah. Aw. I found out that Jennifer Aniston went out with Noah Wyle once! Ginny won't be happy, lol. A bit of OT there for you :) Write write write my Toggle! :D ~Kirsty |