I likes, I likes. Good flow, and you wrote about this theme in an effective manner.
I think someone already said this, but you seemed to be going for a ryme(sp?) in your poem, and it does tend to be a bit (a tiny bit) choppy in places.
But still, I liked it.
Good job.
Cheers.

I like the way you used "breaking" as a relation between yourself and the mirror.
keep it up.
-MM

WONDERFUL! I love this poem, it rhymes, it's awesome, amazing- great job!

~f.f.~

Some of the rhyming doesn't flow totally smoothly (don't mind me, im kind of a perfectionist) but otherwise its a good poem. I like the theme.