Wow.. I love that poem. I hope you don't stop writing, you're really good.
Risa x

Whoa, this is a bit too deep for me to fathom, but your language is expressive enough that I feel it anyway. A rare gift. Most attemtped poets just sound like babbling even when you know exactly what they're talking about.
Katy

Wow, I think that poem was great. I hope you continue writing.

I like this one, though in a way it feels...abstract. I like the feel though. But it's one AM and I'm nuts...I like the placement of Right and wrong in the poem. Overall I like it.