I see most of your poems are freestyle, I personally like ones that rhyme. But this was very good, descriptive.
-Nikki

"placed before him" maybe leave out placed? "To the monster in slime" breaks the mood.

hmm...makes you think...very nifty!

aww... that's so cute... aren't little kids wonderousful!?!?!? It reminds me of how i felt when i was little... and of all the lil' kids i've ever babysat... the wonder with which they behold the world...

Funny one! keep them coming! read and review mine too!

Another look at the glowing demon that is television. I noticed the first words of the last two lines of the first stanza (talk about convoluted directions) aren't capatalized. Just seemed distracting. Other than that I like the poem.