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| Silver Ice 2003-08-05 ch 1,   | Wow, that was touching. I'm not so sure how you can make a poem this good, but you obviously do. |
| table for glasses 2003-07-27 ch 1, | I know exactly the feeling you show with your aunt's shirt as I have also lost a loved one. I like the metaphor you used in the last verse =) |
| cosmo-queen 2003-07-27 ch 1, | That was beautiful. The examples and words you used were just right, and they emanate that sense of loss and grief one feels when one realises that someone, or something, dear to them, is gone forever. I can relate to this, and I am truly sorry for your loss, and hope that your aunty's spirit live on in your memory forever. Beautiful work and stay strong. *cosmo-queen* |
| Chell-o Bodello 2003-07-27 ch 1, | ::sniffles:: that is so touching! I have a friend who would LOVE this poem (her Grandpa died last year) and she still hasn't really gotten over it ... I really like this! ^^ Could you review my works sometime? ^^ Laterz, LUNCH |