Awesome! Just GREAT! That was very good. I could just picture it in my mind...wow...very good! ^_^ Keep it up!

Wow...that's really really good! I loved the lines:

"I'm trapped in my own insanity
I'm drowning in tears of pain
Your face it scares the life out of me
And your voice is like acid rain"

Brilliant!

B.V.Rose~~