| Reviews for Bloodied Corpse |
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lovesickangel 2/12/05 . chapter 1Wow intense. You have alot of feelings, but i'm not here to judge you. I really like it. |
Lady Spear and Friends 10/20/04 . chapter 1wow. just wow. |
Dragen Eyez 9/8/04 . chapter 1 Once upon a time, I knew the same feeling... However, maybe I have a guardian angel... because my plans were (thankfully) averted. Again, I'm extremely glad you have this wonderful outlet of writing. Not only do I get to read amazing poetry (haven't gotten to the fiction yet), but know you as a person (well, sort of, through e-mail) |
rhinestone butterfly 3/22/04 . chapter 1AWESOME! I love it! It reminds me of myself a bit. |
Sweet Sorrow 12/12/03 . chapter 1This is ... wow. I really like it! So good.. you are such a talented writer! I am DEFINATLY adding this to my favorites! Sweet Sorrow |
he-he16 12/7/03 . chapter 1very nice i love your poems keep writing |
FanaticPixie 8/14/03 . chapter 1that was beautiful. And believe me I understand. C. |
Suicidal Butterfly 8/3/03 . chapter 1This is excellent but, I think, personally, if I was you (yeah right). I'd get rid of the word "What", in the last line. In sounds too long. Dosn't run smoothly. But I love the message. I know how it feels. |
HereIDreamtIWasAnArchitect 8/2/03 . chapter 1VERY VERY VERY good, but from you this isnt a surprise! _ I love the last line...the whole thing, really, but the last line I can relate to. Its very good, i like the rhyming. GREAT JOB! |
anon63 7/27/03 . chapter 1*stares speechless* Wow... that was incredible.. it flowed really, really well... my fav lines were "She’s finally completed her final task" and "The thing killing her she has finally killed/With two cuts and a rope, gasoline and 12 pills." I mean, i guess its rather morbid... but in a nice way... :P Great Work! |