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| lovesickangel 2005-02-12 ch 1,   | Wow intense. You have alot of feelings, but i'm not here to judge you. I really like it. |
| Lady Spear and Friends 2004-10-20 ch 1, | wow. just wow. |
| Dragen Eyez 2004-09-08 ch 1, | Once upon a time, I knew the same feeling... However, maybe I have a guardian angel... because my plans were (thankfully) averted. Again, I'm extremely glad you have this wonderful outlet of writing. Not only do I get to read amazing poetry (haven't gotten to the fiction yet), but know you as a person (well, sort of, through e-mail) |
| rhinestone butterfly 2004-03-22 ch 1, | AWESOME! I love it! It reminds me of myself a bit. |
| Sweet Sorrow 2003-12-12 ch 1, | This is ... wow. I really like it! So good.. you are such a talented writer! I am DEFINATLY adding this to my favorites!! ~Sweet Sorrow |
| he-he16 2003-12-07 ch 1, | very nice i love your poems keep writing |
| CLRhodes 2003-08-14 ch 1, | that was beautiful. And believe me I understand. C. |
| Suicidal Butterfly 2003-08-03 ch 1, | This is excellent but, I think, personally, if I was you (yeah right). I'd get rid of the word "What", in the last line. In sounds too long. Dosn't run smoothly. But I love the message. I know how it feels. |
| HereIDreamtIWasAnArchitect 2003-08-02 ch 1, | VERY VERY VERY good, but from you this isnt a surprise! ^_^ I love the last line...the whole thing, really, but the last line I can relate to. Its very good, i like the rhyming. GREAT JOB! |
| Kerbi 2003-07-27 ch 1, | *stares speechless* Wow... that was incredible.. it flowed really, really well... my fav lines were "She’s finally completed her final task" and "The thing killing her she has finally killed/With two cuts and a rope, gasoline and 12 pills." I mean, i guess its rather morbid... but in a nice way... :P Great Work! |