Wow...this is definently a great cliffhanger. I like how she's un-identified until the end.

loved the story cant wait till the next chapter

YAY JESSI AW IM SO HAPPY IM IN IT YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY AND ITS WONDERFUL I FOUND MYSELF GAZING AT THE SCREEN WANTING MORE!ITS AWSOME I LOVE CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER

Hmm.. It's probably her friend Jordan with a different screen name or something. It's good. And the turtles looking back on her was cute. I hope you write more soon.