I would very much like to know the couple. DAMN! Lol very nice very very nice.

very pretty, love the written, good imagery, nicely done

Another great poem from the terrific writer of "tragedy sells"...great! i like the other better, but this is good. couldn't figure out the couple though...oh well. Nice descrips.

i felt that u had a really well written poem here so i m reviewing to tell u that. i think u have the all the makings of a really good writer. please r+r my stuff if u want. i suggest "be where i wanna be", "no title" and "this one is called f* you." keep up the good writing because i would love to read more.
peace
>>recalcitrant

i liked your poem. keep writting. please check out mine pleaze!