  kel89 2004-07-22 . chapter 3 That was really good! Kind of scary, but it was good. Who is Aaron supposed to be? Is that stephen? I thought maybe you put him in your stories. |
  Letters to No One 2004-06-21 . chapter 3(It's 12:23 am...) Aaw, Aaron's so sweet. I love his expressions, too. Ratbag, he called Ty a ratbag, hehehe. Nice job. Will there be more? I suppose I'd read some more of your fics I haven't read but I have to work tomorrow and it's late, early rather... Kudos all the same! |
 Samurai101 2004-04-22 . chapter 3Nice, good, and I'm supposing it's over, ne? Oh bother, I guess it is... |
| You know me 2004-04-19 . chapter 1 Very nice. You've got great talent. Though I don't wonder that Efad didn't notice her friend was sippin' achohol. *Shrugs* Ah well.
I think you may have Efad's responses off a little. Though that may be because it's a tough subject to broach, hard to write, and utterly frightening to experience. *Shakes head* A hint for next time. Ask, and there are some things I'll let you read. It may give insight on the subject.
^^ Very well written. Do keep up the good work. |
| Samurai101 2004-04-06 . chapter 2 0.o Rule Number one: Stay away from intoxicated guys. (There no fun.)
Rule Number Two: Always carry a big stick when out with a boy, that way you can whack him over the head, and stuff him in the trunk if need be. ^.^
Intresting though, and let us hope the brave co-authors come and save her! |
 godsgurl23 2003-08-04 . chapter 1keep going! more! more! |
| Mayana DelMarr 2003-08-02 . chapter 1 o, Efad went on a road trip...with GUYS! Yeah! This Ty guy sounds hot. Whoot! *dances around happily* I'm excited! |
| Samurai101 2003-07-29 . chapter 1 Why do I not like this Ty guy? I don't know. Very nice, only one thing wrong, instead of 'sworn' you used 'sword'. Typo's, aren't they fun! -.-; (As if!) Well I'm hoping you'll put up more soon! |
 Miranda Crystal-Bearer 2003-07-29 . chapter 1Evil! Evil Ty! Evil Ty! ...don't ask why. My first impression says he be evil beyond measure and belief. *Glares* And those guys let her go off with him?!
These six, without a chaperone, on a roadtrip, and all that's happened is socks in the toliet/mircowave on fire? Wow, we're impressed. ^^
Okay, small error. "Hope Alabama has been treating you as well it should." Hum. Perhaps you meant "well, as it should"? Or "as well as it should"?
Sorry about the nitpicking. You know my other complaints. ^^ Other than that, awsome and excellent. |
| Letters to No One 2003-07-28 . chapter 1 Well, I remember you telling me about this one... Good so far! |
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