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| scapegrace 2004-02-01 ch 1,  | abuseI'm cynical, too, but this one just doesn't... flow. I like the point, though. |
| water sprite 2004-01-14 ch 1, | abuseGreat writing, I like this one because its so straight to the point and I may not be cynical but I feel like you do about the way I am. Only one thing, are you trying to say Accept me? when you say Except me? maybe it's just me, maybe not. Either way good poem :) |
| Mors Laminil 2004-01-05 ch 1, | abuseO, I like this one. It's wicked. I admire the choice of wording... it's just about perfect. Wicked, sinister, touching all in one poem. Love it! btw, you know your name is that of a band's right? Well, you do now. ~Mors |
| PhOeNiX02 2003-09-16 ch 1, | abusei can definitely relate to that. i like it... nice job. |
| Chronus 2003-09-10 ch 1, | abusenice work, that really expresses something...Im impressed |
| My Little Poet 2003-08-06 ch 1, | abuseloved how you wrote it. i can definitely relate to this, because i'm cynical as well. only mistake i can find is that "except" should be "accept." other than that, it's all perfect! :-) excellent job! |
| Does it matter 2003-08-02 ch 1, anon. | abusegood **! keep up the good work |