 Shadow Dragon 777 2005-02-17 . chapter 1Wow, that was amazing. The detail one each person while short was exceptionally written. I appluad your work. Keep it up.SD7 |
 Devika-Fay 2005-01-25 . chapter 1great description, i read it over a couple of times, just having fun putting the people together in my mind. |
 SongOfHopeAndJoy 2003-11-25 . chapter 1Hi! I really loved this poem, especially how you tie the first and last stanzas together, and how you were able to keep the same rhythm throughout the whole thing. My only problem with it is I would have liked to know more about the last man, but other than that it was wonderful! |
 M.D. Cantine 2003-09-20 . chapter 1This is good, I like it a lot, and specially the 'three-legged man.' It took me a moment to figure that one out, but the Sphynix's Riddle, ne? Very good, anyway. |
 Granite Claws 2003-08-19 . chapter 1**sighs** So many people in the world, all so diverse. |
 fleshflower 2003-08-16 . chapter 1 thank god there is someone on this site that know what VISUAL is! thank you for showing me what the person is SEEING. i enjoyed all the descriptions, a little base visual and a little emotional side, which helps to better the image of the faces as well. the stanzas are well spaced and the right amount of characters inroduced. great work |
 Neon Tetra 2003-07-29 . chapter 1That you wrote this without having to people-watch, indicates that you have an innate sense of creativity. I like the way it comes full-circle at the end. |