"One Last Poem" ~ What a statement! I know many, MANY writers write in order to release pent up pain.

"Before My Eyes Close" ~ It evokes such a clear image in my mind...

"Golden Daughter" ~ Very touching and sweet. Need I say more? ^_^

"Another Land" ~ Sad yet believing in something better. Very eloquent with its conciseness.

"Nothing Left" ~ This is a sharp contrast to the one before it! Coming after "Another Land", it is shockingly depressing.

"My Own Actions" ~ Scary Angst alert! TAKE COVER!! No offense intended at all, but this is... disturbing... to me.

"In Your Heart" ~ Comforting. ^_^

"Only With Death" ~ Kind of a mix between happy, sad, satisfied and something else I can't put my finger on at the moment, but I like this haiku. It has a certain rhythm to it.

"Run" ~ Roadrunner could! ^_~ But truthfully, death isn't something that can be avoided.

"Angels" ~ Beautiful image.

Overall? Very nicely written! *gives Mime a thumbs-up*

OOh, I like this too! I would absolutely LOVE if you could tell me what you think of my poetry, cause I love yours a TON!! anyway, I think haikus are touch cause you are so restricted, and you just have to get out there and SAY IT so ya..

Beautiful haiku,
Oh so hard are you to write!
A short, sudden storm

Ok, that was bad. Ignore me. Bye!(good job)

~Kiara

awesome set! sad, but moving, sweet, beautifully written, and very meaningful. great messages conveyed also. good job! keep on writing!

The final act. What would we say or do, how would we react? This is but one way of expressing ourselves, trying to run off a lifelong list in the split seconds remaining of ones life cannot be easy. Nice job, you captured some real emotion in there...

This was really awesome. Each one captured so much emotion within themselves. Great, great job! Do write more!

These were all so beautiful! So beautiful, yet so sad... I loved them all!

~ CoolBeans18s

Sad, but beautiful. I wish I'd discovered these during my death-related-poem-obsession phase. "Only With Death" was my favorite: I like the point made inside it.
~God bless~

It's rather depressing but it is a great piece!

wow, these were really good
my haiku alway suck.
^__^
[audig]

every last one of these is a tear jerker...very emotional and pretty.

Wonderful writes, they were amazing in how you expressed yourself. BTW, thanks for the review.

Wow this (these) was really good! I'm not much for haikus, but these were really awesome. Good job!

Gosh..."Only With Death" & "Angels" are my favourite! Great job, I mean...wonderful!

Such a great deal of emotion conveyed in those 11 verses. I think I like "Run" very, very much. Great work!!

Bah, you gave me a shock when I read, "One last poem before I die..."!

Ahem, they are all beautiful!! My favs would have to be... "Before My Eyes Close", "Another Land", "Run", and "Angels". Awesome work!

Keep writing!