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| enjee 2005-09-13 ch 3,  | abuseYou've contrasted differences between the characters very well, each having their own ranking in the social ladder! You should really update soon so we readers can read the rest of the story! =) |
| enjee 2005-09-13 ch 2, | abuseSweet chapter! They seem to have a lot in common.. I hope Keiran stands up for himself as he develops in the story. ~mimi. |
| enjee 2005-09-13 ch 1, | abuseInteresting introduction..very funny as well. I like that kindy kid example, I couldn't help laughing out loud. =D |
| thefuturejessicarabbit 2005-05-08 ch 3, anon. | abusekeep writing! |
| C. Regeling 2005-03-31 ch 3, | abusei like it, keep going ... i dont have any critis ... but i really like the story so keep it up! Update soon Jorja : ) |
| Ave Nosredna 2004-01-14 ch 3, | abuseCool..I like it...please update soon!! ~Ave |
| summercutie 2003-11-28 ch 3, | abuseReally good job! please update soon! If, u haven't noticed i've reviewed a lot of ur stories cuz im just looking at ur page thingy. Anyway great stories so far :) |
| KaitieRae 2003-09-17 ch 3, | abuseAwesome story! I like it!! More please!! |
| JeWeLzKriScO25 2003-09-16 ch 3, | abuseCOOL! I like your writing! Keep updating! |
| FamousOneLiners 2003-08-15 ch 3, | abusetis good story, and i cant stand Grace ^_^ |
| khaotiik 2003-08-15 ch 3, | abuseo, nadine sounds so evil, yet human. good work on this chapter, i like this fic second best after your aphaya one! |
| comtesssorelli 2003-08-11 ch 2, | abuseAw! I wish real life could work out, like I hope it will for the characters. Sad how I can relate. This story is very realistic and enjoyable and I hope it continues. |
| FamousOneLiners 2003-08-07 ch 2, | abuseno i want more! tis funny and interesting! |
| catviolist 2003-07-28 ch 1, | abusewell, besides the fact that i'll be miserable until there's more ;) i love it! I really like the laid back personal style of it. There no pretentions. The part about seeing the bus at the bus sitting comfortably doesn't really go with missing the bus...mabye a different adj. to describe the bus at the end of the street? To me that was the only rough spot. I can't wait to read more!! |
| Sunburst Angel 2003-07-28 ch 1, | abuseI like the idea for the story. It's a very original and very good story. The part in the beginning before the dream confused me a little, though. Please keep writing. |