YOU! Either update or e-mail it to me. You always do this, and i never get to finish any of your stories.

hmph,

Ali

This is a very touching story. I can't wait to see where you take this, update soon.

That was touching. Maybe, when describing Briget Mae's two different lives, with her mom and her foster parents, you could use a little more flow. It was a little too blunt for me. It was great otherwise!

Always 'n' Forever

!Laura!

Aw, so sad, so touching. I love it. and the idea of the mother giving the child a magic book is so original. Keep it up. I'll be checking back.

4eva,

Daisy

Oh my gosh. *tearing up* *tears* that was an emotional one. *phew* okay, i think the one thing is maybe longer chapters? i don't know, I'm trying to help.

Always 'n' Forever

!Laura!

Well...I must say...it's different all right. I think it'll pick up in the next chapter.

Always 'n' Forever

!Laura!

Oh, I love the intro. You make colors sound so deep, so mysterious, in a way I've never thought about before. Plz keep writing. I'll check back to read it. Good work. .