This song is very moving and well constructed. I love it! I love a lot of your songs, and I need to sit down and pick out my favorites. :)
I was going to review this a long time ago, but I fell ill and have just now been able to get online, so I apologize for not being able to be prompt.
Take care,
Chris

That was beautiful. Can't really think of anything else to say, I was just blown away, ha, that rhymes. Sorry. Yeah, I really liked that.

This is really very beautiful and deep, like all your work it seems. It reminds me of Shakespeare. Is this perhaps a work inspired by Romeo&Juliet? Just wondering because it seems that way. It has the same tragic flavour.

hi hi...likes alot. very good...I'm not good at reveiws..but ya, thanx and good. :)

wow, i never thought that someone would read my work. THANK YOOS! your work is amazing. Very deep. I truely hope your band takes off. Bon Chance! Au Revoir!

i liked this one, travis! good job. i keep finding ones i like more and more, you do a wonderful job of painting pictures in my (at LEAST my) mind.

color outside the lines

M... so powerful. I really love this; the title is so appropriate to the dark feeling you gave. Amazing work.

I really liked this one, but i don't agree with how you ask for people to review your stuff in every review you give...but yeah...do you think you could check some of my stuff out?

wow that was a great poem...its so deep i dont think i could ever write anything like that. i love the way u write...i also wanted to thank you for reviewing one of my poems. the reviews mean a lot.

That's so good...I thought I'd come over and review something else because you are *so* talented. You seem so poetic and...it's nice to find that in the song category at fictionpress.

It's a nice flowing poem. My English isn't that strong, so I don't know what

sypthothy and thew means.

I can actually imagine this being an acoustic folk song.

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