Wonderful story so far. I notice you haven't updated recently. I hope you do. By the way, I was the happiest person in that building when you got homecoming queen. I thought you should know.

lol...my computer freaked out on me right in the middle of my review. what i was saying was i think they should torture him in the worst way possible *winks* can't wait for the next chap!

WOW...Im glad Lex and Emily discoverd that Ryan was really an **! I wonder what they are going to do to him...hum...I think they should dedefinatlydefinatl

*sighs in relief* thank god they found out the truth about that... there's no word to describe him...
ooh payback... *evil smile* I just can't wait... hehehehehe
update soon!

Good. I hope she catches Ryan. He is such a jerk. He needs to die. Sorry about that rant. I just really hate him right now. I love the story. ^_^

I absolutley LOVE it! I hope Lexi and Emily realize that Ryan is just a complete **! I wonder what is going to happen?Will Emily discover them together...oh no then she'll probably blame Lexi!NO! Okay u have to update ASAP cause I'm dying over here!

Wow. Intense. GOod Work. Keep Updating =)

uh-oh... we all know what's coming next...
update soon!
(kill off ryan! he needs to die.) ^_^

this story is... is... frustrating. I mean, it's really good and all, but i just want Ryan to get run over by a train... or fall off a cliff.
Something similar.
He is... the definition of scum...
Should you choose to update, i'd read it... (please?)

Okay I haven't read your story yet... (i'm going to, this just couldn't wait)
Your name... I saw it on my review thing and was like, "OH MY GOD! THAT'S THE BEST PENNAME I'VE EVER SEEN!" and so of course i just HAD to come read your stories... because after all, anyone with the awesome penname you have has to have great stories. ;)
Finding Nemo is like my all time favorite movie ever... Ever... Seriously, i've been at the point of obsession over it ever since it first came out... and it's not only me... my friends too. We're obsessed together.
I think I shall go read your story now... Or if i don't actually read it yet, i will later... i promise.

OMG! ryan is getting on my nerves!.. grr, haha, good story. i am on chapter 10, and continuing!

Aw...honey, u have to update on this story! You have got a really unique style of writing and u need to update! I am thirsting for more here! Just tell me of you need any ideas on this story, cause I got tons!! On a little side note, you might want to make the chapters a little longer. This story really does have potential!! Post soon!!

Wow. I wonder what is going to happen next. Ryan is such a jerk. I can't wait for the next update. Good job on the story.

Yay! You finally updated! I know you're busy girl, but really! I can't wait for these two to kick Ryan's butt. He is such a jerk. But eventually, Emily and Alexia will come to realize the same thing most of us girls figure out at some point: A best friend is forever, despite our attempts to sabotage them sometimes. When you make a connection with a best friend, that connection stays. You could go for months or years without speaking, and then pick up the phone and start gabbing like you'd just seen each other yesterday.

You mentioned to me that you were beginning to feel like you didn't know where to go with this story. I think this is a great opportunity for you to take this in a direction that deals with the girls' friendship with each other. They will have to figure out what is going on eventually, and they will probably be mad and hurt with each other for a time. But best friends are forever. Maybe they could eventually work things out, and plot a revenge on Ryan.

Don't give up on this story! Make yourself see it through. It's great so far!

I love this storry. Keep going!