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nomy
2007-12-20
ch 16, anon.
abuseits so sweet...you just make my day..i just love the story and how you wrote it ,it just so beautiful..and i know it seems a cliche review but i dont care...hehehe..^_~
i-see-faeries
2007-11-11
ch 16,
abuseAw, this is cute! ;D It got sort of sappy towards the end, but I still love it. LOL. And they seem so hot. Great job with this story.
Holy Trin
2007-08-22
ch 1,
abuseOkay I'm stopping here. No offense but there's jst no realism in here. Calling someone beautiful is the first step to falling in love? Wow that's insecure. And "meant to be between a man and a woman, but here was happening between two men"? You know you're writing in aid of slash right? I'm sorry bt to put it like that just implies you think it's wrong. Or if you specifically meant it to be in your charecters narration then you have one ** up gay man. The preise was intersting but the sex was just painful. So that as far as this goes for me.
hot-caues-your-not
2007-07-07
ch 1,
abuseI loove this story!
Green Eyed Pixie
2006-08-02
ch 16,
abuseI loved reading this story! And apart from a few typos it was perfect! (im such a hypocryte, i typo all the time =]) I love Destin (such a cool name) and Blaiz, they're awesome and so cute together. And what i found the best is that they actually seem like real people. I also see that you have already made a sequel, with my fav option might i add XD. Loved it, and i can't wait to read the sequel!
Hentell Ann Rothorn
2006-01-10
ch 1,
abusei love this story you need to hurry up and update please!snifflesme love storyyou are good
straightfromtheheart16
2005-12-09
ch 16,
abusethat was ** amazing... i just sat here and read it straight through... ok so i lied i took a dinner break... but i was amazing. Please keep writing. I love your style and the story. Hopefully same sex marriage will be allowed all over the world some day soon. Thankyou for writing this.
Edwit
2005-11-29
ch 2,
abuseThat was ** hilarious. "...but my name's not Dustin." Ahaha... Awesome work.

-Robin
Edwit
2005-11-29
ch 1,
abuseHow very pretty. That guy, Blaiz, sounded so hot. Purple shirt? Mm, yummy... Yeah. You're a great writer. And the dance scenes are so erotic. Very nice, very pretty.

-Robin
Collar de Espinas
2005-11-16
ch 16,
abuse...I loved it. There really isn't anything else I can say- I just loved it! Initially, Dustin REALLY reminded me of Brian from QAF...then I kept reading and he became so different. I love how they found each other and changed their ways for each other.

This is definitely going on my Favourites list!
Kithaniella
2005-08-17
ch 16,
abuseOH my God, there are actual tears in my eyes, that was so beautiful! *snivel* GREAT STORY! much kudos (or many?) I bow to your writing abilities!
Kithaniella
2005-08-17
ch 10,
abuseIs it just me or is it ** adorable that Dustin is ready to accept 'I forgot' as an answer?!? It's so sweet!
Kithaniella
2005-08-17
ch 1,
abuseOMG! This is great, and not only because of the lemon, but the characters. I like it so far...
sweetredink
2005-08-05
ch 16,
abuseXD I just realized that I read the sequel to this story before this one... now it all makes sense. :-P
pneumothorax
2005-06-06
ch 16,
abuseIinitially, reading this was curious because I'd just read 'Kiss Me Proper' so it was like reading history. That made me a little sad, because it's weird to see characters have kids etc sometimes. Good fic, glad I found it again. You didn't drag it out too long. Nice job.
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