Beautiful imagery and what a wonderful message!

I like it. It's prettyy and wondeful. Yup yup.

Beautiful. That is such a wonderful poem. I have no suggestions. It's perfect the way it is.

WOW! This was so wonderful! I loved it! I love the way you write but I can't begin to describe it. Excellent job!

~*~AbunaiChikara

I like this. It's encouraging.

This rocks! It was so amazing.


~Heart of the Sword

wonderful. well written, encouraging ending, so true. i like it. god job. keep on writing!

awesome, Awesome, AWESOME! Wow... that was simply fantastic. Goodness, where do you come up with such wisdom as this? How else can I describe this?

Incredible. Amazing. Purrfect. (Meow)

Well, this is definantely going my favorites. Cheers to you for such a great parable of hope. God bless.