WOW. once again, an incredible incredible message...and so, so perfectly worded.

You were correct, this does speak volumes! Another job fantastically done! Excellent work!

~*~AbunaiChikara

This is beautiful. I simply loved it.

This was so packed with feeling. It was incredible to read it.


~Heart of the Sword

great poem! very sad and angsty, but well written. i like it. great job!

Packed full of emotion, and obviously written in the heat of a moment. An incredible angst poem. You always have such amazing metaphors for what you are trying to express, and it always sounds marvelous.

This is such a beautiful poem! Sad, yes, but so real; so true. It reminds me of one that one of my brother's friends wrote called 'Child of mask' it's basically to the same degree (though not completely) but it uses the analogy of a mask instead of a door... I must translate and send it to you one day if you want to read it. Anyway... I can so relate to this.