um... there's some sort of download problem i think, or else there's text missing... but otherwise i oike it. It has a chinese-proverb sort of charm...

I've just read all of your work. Sorry for not reviewing it individually. It's very... unique. You have your own style and without very many words you can make the story touching, sweet or cute. It's quite interesting. Keep it up.

i like this too... you have an interesting style and viewpoint...

makes you really think...

and i like the idea of no one knowing when a fish cries

wow...this one caught my attention right away. that fish and water thing really clicked in my mind. i look forward to an update

Plenty of grammatical mistakes, but I don't mnid it this time because you have a very interesting idea of story and your wording is very unique. *smile* This is the first time I ever saw a story with this sort of "plot", per se and it's very...touching. It is.