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Reviews For: What Dreams May Come

Kyketsuki Tenshi
2003-12-31
ch 3,
abuseI cant believe it has taken me so long to review nearl anybodies work. Please forgive me?
great chap, im intriuged.
Will
Jenisita
2003-12-13
ch 3, anon.
abusegreat start! keep it up! you've got the potential set up for a good story line!
Silken Silver Berries
2003-09-21
ch 2,
abuseaw! i just want to smack that stupid boy! if he knows her so well then why can't he see she's in love with him! oi yoi yoi yoi yoi yoi yoi...boys! they're hopeless at the best of times! this ones just plain blind. oivay, that nut! god, what's wrong with him anyway?

lol, okay, again, aw! i love rini! i find it funny how she talks to herself. lol, she's cute. i like her. (character! i'm not a lesbian!) lol, great work! just i think you mean "definitely" when you say "defiantly." don't worry, i've seen lots of people mess that up...jeez! and i have to go study! o, i'm a terrible one, leaving all my studying until the last minute. oivay, i'm a dummy! really i am! lol, okay, so, shutting up now. great work! UPDATE SOON! please! *hug*

*ssb
poodlefreak
2003-09-19
ch 2,
abuseI really really enjoy this story, and it's well written except for grammatical errors but that's easy to change. Keep writing this story I wanna know what's next!
Chris Lee Scott
2003-08-07
ch 2,
abuseAHH! I love it! So real. I could relate every step of the way. This is an incredible job. Keep up the good work.

~CLS~
LOOK! My signature say **!
Kyketsuki Tenshi
2003-08-03
ch 1,
abuseI know it's weird reviewing the prologue, but i forgot to add the story to my faourites, and since i can't review chap 2 again and add it that way, this is my other option, keep writing! oh almighty writer that you are ^_^

N.E.A
Kyketsuki Tenshi
2003-08-02
ch 2,
abuseSweet! Dude! Awsome! Rad! im gonna stop acting like the fool and be honest now. This is the start of a great story. I like the plot, a story within a story, it's a nice way...to look inside from the outside? that doesn't make sense really, you'll understand next time we talk coz i'll explain. damn your school, i miss you in the mornings, honestly. catch you later.
love
me!
Eternal Twilight
2003-08-01
ch 2,
abuseAhh, yes...after a long wait- you finally managed to post this thing up. And indeed, I can see some of the changes taking place in the first- or rather, not counting the prologue- second chap.

Well, you can block me, ** me out, whatever. But I must say I was greatly amazed that you changed the friend's name from 'Bloss' to 'Britain'...not in the least surprised though.

I don't know what you all have against me...and I don't care anymore. I tried saying I was sorry and made an attempt to start over...but that was shot down as usual. I know who my real friends are, and if you don't want to be one of them...then fine.

I want you to know that I cared about you deeply...as you used to be my best friend. But now, as I look at all that went on and what's now going on- I don't know what to think anymore. Hate me all you want, and ignore me as you wish, but that is how I see things.

I for one don't understand...and maybe never will. But that's all right. Life is like that, is it not? At one time things are peachy, and then the next fate throws you a curve ball and you discover new things about people? Indeed.

I hope you have a nice life, Heather...as I know my own couldn't be better.

Blessed be,

~Blossom
geometrygal
2003-07-30
ch 1,
abuseaw, you are such a sweetie. ^_^ As long as you keep up those beautiful reviews, I'll keep on writing. ^_^ Wonderful beta, huh? ^_^ I like me the sound of that. Love ya babe!!
geometrygal
2003-07-30
ch 2,
abuseWoot!! Wonderful Elsbells!! I simply loved the second time through. Alex should die a terrible death. ^_^

More!!
Slideshow
2003-07-29
ch 2,
abusenever watched Dawson's Creek before, but this story sounds just as good. (I've watched a few episodes but notta whole lot). great work, keep it up.

check out my stories if you have the time.
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