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Reviews For: The Secret behind the Smile
AVIGON 2003-07-29 . chapter 1
I love how you closed the circle of this story... The story itself (she/friend) could've been worked out a bit more, but if it's "vague" you're going for, it'll do nicely.
Nyze Skairey Aptle 2003-07-29 . chapter 1
my smile...i have never seen it. do i smile? umm...there is a person i see everyday in my house. she a theif. she try to copy me.
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