I don't know what to say about this poem. I love how you describe what you are feeling. It helps me understand you, and entices me to write again. I wish my talents could equal yours. Your style draws people in, in a way I never could. Cheerio!

hehe the end of this one made me smile. :) again, can muchly relate to this. it's very nicely written, flows impossibly well and the approximate rhyme is as perfect as always (why no, i never AM going to get over the way you always manage to do that, so you're just going to have to listen to me marvel at it over and over and over again! muahaha!). liked the simple yet lovely clarity in the way you described this particular learning experience. favorite lines and bits of lines were: "my hope was kept alive/but it had trouble breathing," "i misconstrued the turning of the world," "cut myself on the impersonality of my nature" (loved the idea of not being able to be personal with *yourself* ~ i mean really, how much closer can you get to someone, right? :P really intriguing idea), and "[dreams] do come true./oh yes indeed" (the last line fit there *so* perfectly, t'was really sweet without being corny in the least ~ most people couldn't pull that off, i am quite impressed). great job on this, liked it a lot. :)

Aw...*speechless*

~Stoffpferd~